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Tuesday 17 December 2019

D2 A2 - One Small Step For Man

Attribution: Neil Armstrong

I have chosen to write two Haiku Poems about how I would have felt, landing on the moon.

Landing on the moon,
bouncing on a trampoline,
I was terrified!

Floating in the air,
while moving in slow motion,
I was excited!

1 comment:

  1. Hey Amelia,

    Sorry it took me a while before I could comment on your post. Great effort with this task, I love how you put a unique spin on this and made to thoughtful haiku's that play off of each other really well, I like how they end with opposite feelings like a journey has happened between the two.

    I hope you have enjoyed the SLJ tasks you've done so far. It’s been a while since you’ve posted but hopefully you’ll give some more a go. Remember that you can go back or skip ahead to do the tasks in any order you like so maybe start with the most interesting ones first.

    See you in the comments soon.

    Daniel :D

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